Coffeehouse for desis
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

Love Story 1. Part 10.

+3
charvaka
artood2
Propagandhi711
7 posters

Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Propagandhi711 Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:07 pm

this thread needs commentary from joblessfella.

Propagandhi711

Posts : 6941
Join date : 2011-04-29

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:16 pm

There're more parts coming, right?! Serious question :-)

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by artood2 Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:29 pm

Richard Hed wrote: There're more parts coming, right?! Serious question :-)

There is "love letters returning" episode still to come Very Happy
artood2
artood2

Posts : 1321
Join date : 2011-04-30

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:33 pm

artood2 wrote:
Richard Hed wrote: There're more parts coming, right?! Serious question :-)

There is "love letters returning" episode still to come Very Happy

Ah...yeah - return love letters while wearing skimpy outfit... Very Happy

*rubbing hands*

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:36 pm

Richard Hed wrote: There're more parts coming, right?! Serious question :-)

egads....you actually read all those sections? at least comment something so that I know you were reading.... Smile

Well, when I was writing this 3 years ago, I had penned down a few parts of 'intermediate' phase and love story 2.

If you still have the guts for it, I can post them here. If you needed aspirin to finish reading that, I will stop.

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by charvaka Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:38 pm

How many people read all 10 parts?

Full disclosure: I haven't read even one part. Anybody want to do a quick summary of the plot?
charvaka
charvaka

Posts : 4347
Join date : 2011-04-28
Location : Berkeley, CA

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:39 pm

he he...probably only I read all the 10 parts....

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by artood2 Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:39 pm

charvaka wrote:How many people read all 10 parts?

Full disclosure: I haven't read even one part. Anybody want to do a quick summary of the plot?

Read it if you are in a mood to watch a teen flick. Same story line as the last one you watched.. yeah that one..
artood2
artood2

Posts : 1321
Join date : 2011-04-30

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by artood2 Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:41 pm

Tracy Whitney wrote:he he...probably only I read all the 10 parts....

hey i read all ten... I am conducting the talent hunt for Mills and Boon.
artood2
artood2

Posts : 1321
Join date : 2011-04-30

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:42 pm

Tracy Whitney wrote:
Richard Hed wrote: There're more parts coming, right?! Serious question :-)

egads....you actually read all those sections? at least comment something so that I know you were reading.... Smile

Well, when I was writing this 3 years ago, I had penned down a few parts of 'intermediate' phase and love story 2.

If you still have the guts for it, I can post them here. If you needed aspirin to finish reading that, I will stop.

No no - don't stop. I have "the guts" for it...I've read all the parts. What do you want me to do - post comments on every part as proof? Very Happy

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:45 pm

charvaka wrote:How many people read all 10 parts?

Full disclosure: I haven't read even one part. Anybody want to do a quick summary of the plot?

I've read all 10. Partly because it's been a fun read (really!) and a little due to the fact that I'm WFH remotely.
Plus auntiefestation of other discussions... Smile

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by artood2 Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:47 pm

Richard Hed wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:
Richard Hed wrote: There're more parts coming, right?! Serious question :-)

egads....you actually read all those sections? at least comment something so that I know you were reading.... Smile

Well, when I was writing this 3 years ago, I had penned down a few parts of 'intermediate' phase and love story 2.

If you still have the guts for it, I can post them here. If you needed aspirin to finish reading that, I will stop.

No no - don't stop. I have "the guts" for it...I've read all the parts. What do you want me to do - post comments on every part as proof? Very Happy

Name all friends mentioned in all 10 and classify them info suitors, potential suitors, suitors masquerading as messengers, bet takers, suitors masquerading as advisors and female friends.
artood2
artood2

Posts : 1321
Join date : 2011-04-30

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:49 pm

artood2 wrote:
Richard Hed wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:
Richard Hed wrote: There're more parts coming, right?! Serious question :-)

egads....you actually read all those sections? at least comment something so that I know you were reading.... Smile

Well, when I was writing this 3 years ago, I had penned down a few parts of 'intermediate' phase and love story 2.

If you still have the guts for it, I can post them here. If you needed aspirin to finish reading that, I will stop.

No no - don't stop. I have "the guts" for it...I've read all the parts. What do you want me to do - post comments on every part as proof? Very Happy

Name all friends mentioned in all 10 and classify them info suitors, potential suitors, suitors masquerading as messengers, bet takers, suitors masquerading as advisors and female friends.

Love Story 1. Part 10. 3077217049

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by ashaNirasha Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:50 pm

artood2 wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:he he...probably only I read all the 10 parts....

hey i read all ten... I am conducting the talent hunt for Mills and Boon.


The question is - Have you read any Mills and Booon? You got to have more than a peck on the cheek for that, you know.

(I read parts of one part, so far.., so don't know if it has more to qualify for M&B)

ashaNirasha

Posts : 362
Join date : 2011-05-09

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by artood2 Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:51 pm

ashaNirasha wrote:
artood2 wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:he he...probably only I read all the 10 parts....

hey i read all ten... I am conducting the talent hunt for Mills and Boon.


The question is - Have you read any Mills and Booon? You got to have more than a peck on the cheek for that, you know.

(I read parts of one part, so far.., so don't know if it has more to qualify for M&B)

Yeah I concluded not talented enough Very Happy there is still one interesting episode to come so I have some hope. Or we can consider her for the new under-10 line of books coming out soon.
artood2
artood2

Posts : 1321
Join date : 2011-04-30

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:59 pm

artood2 wrote:
Richard Hed wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:
Richard Hed wrote: There're more parts coming, right?! Serious question :-)

egads....you actually read all those sections? at least comment something so that I know you were reading.... Smile

Well, when I was writing this 3 years ago, I had penned down a few parts of 'intermediate' phase and love story 2.

If you still have the guts for it, I can post them here. If you needed aspirin to finish reading that, I will stop.

No no - don't stop. I have "the guts" for it...I've read all the parts. What do you want me to do - post comments on every part as proof? Very Happy

Name all friends mentioned in all 10 and classify them info suitors, potential suitors, suitors masquerading as messengers, bet takers, suitors masquerading as advisors and female friends.

Story of Rajshree Paralkar

Suitors: Kamal Purusnani, "Kinetic" Kabir Paralkar & Suraj bharjatya (hence Rajshree productions - separate storyline - for later)
Potential suitors: Sanjeev the Shakespearean Paaji
suitors masquerading as messengers/advisors: Rajesh aka slimeball

female friends - needs subcategories:

best female friends: Bhakti & Bharati
female role-model friend: Anjali
new friend: Maithili
extra players: Michael, Kamal's SIL.

Saaka? Innu bekaa? Smile

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:07 pm

artood2 wrote:
Yeah I concluded not talented enough Very Happy there is still one interesting episode to come so I have some hope. Or we can consider her for the new under-10 line of books coming out soon.

Dude, pls tell me you were joking!

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 3:21 pm

Richard Hed wrote:
artood2 wrote:
Richard Hed wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:
Richard Hed wrote: There're more parts coming, right?! Serious question :-)

egads....you actually read all those sections? at least comment something so that I know you were reading.... Smile

Well, when I was writing this 3 years ago, I had penned down a few parts of 'intermediate' phase and love story 2.

If you still have the guts for it, I can post them here. If you needed aspirin to finish reading that, I will stop.

No no - don't stop. I have "the guts" for it...I've read all the parts. What do you want me to do - post comments on every part as proof? Very Happy

Name all friends mentioned in all 10 and classify them info suitors, potential suitors, suitors masquerading as messengers, bet takers, suitors masquerading as advisors and female friends.

Story of Rajshree Paralkar

Suitors: Kamal Purusnani, "Kinetic" Kabir Paralkar & Suraj bharjatya (hence Rajshree productions - separate storyline - for later)
Potential suitors: Sanjeev the Shakespearean Paaji
suitors masquerading as messengers/advisors: Rajesh aka slimeball

female friends - needs subcategories:

best female friends: Bhakti & Bharati
female role-model friend: Anjali
new friend: Maithili
extra players: Michael, Kamal's SIL.

Saaka? Innu bekaa? Smile

OMG. that was funny. lol.

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by artood2 Wed Jul 20, 2011 4:02 pm

Richard Hed wrote:
artood2 wrote:
Yeah I concluded not talented enough Very Happy there is still one interesting episode to come so I have some hope. Or we can consider her for the new under-10 line of books coming out soon.

Dude, pls tell me you were joking!

10 was the IQ cutoff.
artood2
artood2

Posts : 1321
Join date : 2011-04-30

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by artood2 Wed Jul 20, 2011 4:03 pm

Richard Hed wrote:
artood2 wrote:
Richard Hed wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:
Richard Hed wrote: There're more parts coming, right?! Serious question :-)

egads....you actually read all those sections? at least comment something so that I know you were reading.... Smile

Well, when I was writing this 3 years ago, I had penned down a few parts of 'intermediate' phase and love story 2.

If you still have the guts for it, I can post them here. If you needed aspirin to finish reading that, I will stop.

No no - don't stop. I have "the guts" for it...I've read all the parts. What do you want me to do - post comments on every part as proof? Very Happy

Name all friends mentioned in all 10 and classify them info suitors, potential suitors, suitors masquerading as messengers, bet takers, suitors masquerading as advisors and female friends.

Story of Rajshree Paralkar

Suitors: Kamal Purusnani, "Kinetic" Kabir Paralkar & Suraj bharjatya (hence Rajshree productions - separate storyline - for later)
Potential suitors: Sanjeev the Shakespearean Paaji
suitors masquerading as messengers/advisors: Rajesh aka slimeball

female friends - needs subcategories:

best female friends: Bhakti & Bharati
female role-model friend: Anjali
new friend: Maithili
extra players: Michael, Kamal's SIL.

Saaka? Innu bekaa? Smile


I just got fired as the talent hunter. they will be extending an offer to you. Your attention to details did the trick.
artood2
artood2

Posts : 1321
Join date : 2011-04-30

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 4:11 pm

artood2 wrote:
I just got fired as the talent hunter. they will be extending an offer to you. Your attention to details did the trick.

Naah - that's your gig; I just like the series as it's a fun read, dude.
Remember fizo_al on CH-blogs? He/She would write similar part-by-part stories... Smile

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Kris Wed Jul 20, 2011 10:30 pm

If I were to hazard a guess here, I think it was the MBA requirement that really pushed Kamal over the edge.
Would that some of us had had that kind of foresight.

BTW, nice work Trace.
Smile

Kris

Posts : 5460
Join date : 2011-04-28

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Wed Jul 20, 2011 11:34 pm

Kris wrote:If I were to hazard a guess here, I think it was the MBA requirement that really pushed Kamal over the edge.

Smile

ouch... you too? I had heard this allegation for a long time. It was tiring to keep
justifying it.

BTW, nice work Trace.

Thanks! hope you meant it coz more is coming up Very Happy

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Kris Wed Jul 20, 2011 11:55 pm

ouch... you too? I had heard this allegation for a long time.

>>> No. no- I was envious of Kamal. He said girl or no girl, I am not doing an MBA. Period. Hahaha


Thanks! hope you meant it coz more is coming up

>>>> Wait, is it about you breaking Ramesh's heart? Smile

Kris

Posts : 5460
Join date : 2011-04-28

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Guest Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:22 am

Kris wrote:He said girl or no girl, I am not doing an MBA. Period. Hahaha


lol!

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Rekz Thu Jul 21, 2011 12:43 pm




Mushkil bada yeh pyar hai Crying or Very sad

Intermission


[quote="Tracy Whitney"]


‘You are weak. Physically you may be strong, but mentally you are a weak man. At heart, you are a weak man. You can’t carry on anything. You can’t achieve anything. You can’t keep your promises. I can’t be with a weak man. Respect is as important to me as love is. I can’t respect a weak man. I don’t respect you anymore. I cannot marry you. I can’t marry a loser like you’.

Kamal, please marry him off to her. I am going away’. She was startled, ‘What happened’? I cried and came out of the house. She ran out after me. Kamal tried to approach us, but she told him to go back in. When I sat on my scooter, she held its handle. ‘What has Kamal done to you? Please tell me. Why are you so upset’. I was talking while sobbing now. ‘He harasses me a lot. I can’t take it any more’. She understood. ‘What to do beta? He harasses me too. Every day he demands that I make the chapattis for him. Else he throws a tantrum and doesn’t eat food. And the days that I have to go to a party, he deliberately eats late. He has made me miss so many appointments and parties’.
Rekz
Rekz

Posts : 1086
Join date : 2011-04-30

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Rekz Thu Jul 21, 2011 12:43 pm




Mushkil bada yeh pyar hai Crying or Very sad

Intermission


[quote="Tracy Whitney"]


‘You are weak. Physically you may be strong, but mentally you are a weak man. At heart, you are a weak man. You can’t carry on anything. You can’t achieve anything. You can’t keep your promises. I can’t be with a weak man. Respect is as important to me as love is. I can’t respect a weak man. I don’t respect you anymore. I cannot marry you. I can’t marry a loser like you’.

Kamal, please marry him off to her. I am going away’. She was startled, ‘What happened’? I cried and came out of the house. She ran out after me. Kamal tried to approach us, but she told him to go back in. When I sat on my scooter, she held its handle. ‘What has Kamal done to you? Please tell me. Why are you so upset’. I was talking while sobbing now. ‘He harasses me a lot. I can’t take it any more’. She understood. ‘What to do beta? He harasses me too. Every day he demands that I make the chapattis for him. Else he throws a tantrum and doesn’t eat food. And the days that I have to go to a party, he deliberately eats late. He has made me miss so many appointments and parties’.
Rekz
Rekz

Posts : 1086
Join date : 2011-04-30

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Mr. T Thu Jul 21, 2011 12:50 pm

[quote="Rekz"]


Mushkil bada yeh pyar hai Crying or Very sad

Intermission

* Clap * * clap * * Clasp *

Mr. T

Posts : 262
Join date : 2011-07-05

Back to top Go down

Love Story 1. Part 10. Empty Re: Love Story 1. Part 10.

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum