Love Story 1. Part 2.

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Post by Guest on Mon Jul 18, 2011 5:27 am

tw,

break up your posts into smaller pieces.

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Post by MaxEntropy_Man on Mon Jul 18, 2011 7:19 am

now that kamal is here, when does rajini(kanth) enter the story?

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Re: Love Story 1. Part 2.

Post by Merlot Daruwala on Mon Jul 18, 2011 7:38 am

Haha..hopefully his entry will accelerate the pace a bit. After a thousand words, Kamal's only managed to get the heroine's heart racing. At this rate, when does he get to first base and beyond??

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Post by Propagandhi711 on Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:32 am

writing my goodbye cruel world letter. should be done soon.

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Post by Guest on Mon Jul 18, 2011 8:45 am

Sorry, this story will be stuck in second gear all the way through. So this is the wrong space to be looking for pace.

Besides I wrote all this three years ago. I would be writing it a bit differently if I were writing it today.

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Post by Merlot Daruwala on Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:05 am

Tracy Whitney wrote:Sorry, this story will be stuck in second gear all the way through. So this is the wrong space to be looking for pace.


Aw..c'mon. You know it couldn't be so sterile in real life. Whatever happened to those hormones and physical urges etc?? It's just a matter of realigning your focus. As a modern customer-oriented professional, you really ought to share the finer details that your readers want, and not just the goody-goody stuff you'd like to see in print.

Tracy Whitney wrote:Besides I wrote all this three years ago. I would be writing it a bit differently if I were writing it today.

Ok, that sounds promising. How abt some details on that worldview-changing event that happened to the narrator during those three years and then you can revert back to the old story of Kamal and Kabir vying for he heroine's affections?

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