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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 1:49 pm

Saikdo gham dubate rahe is kashti ko

Bas ek tera gham hai jo humko hee le dooba.

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Post by artood2 Thu Aug 04, 2011 1:53 pm

The poet is floating high up in his imagination, else he would have drowned with the boat. Poetry and Physics.. ufff.
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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:00 pm

well, the poet survived all the boat breakages and swam through proudly and rebuilt the boat. The poet could not survived 'self' breakage.

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Post by artood2 Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:04 pm

Tracy Whitney wrote:well, the poet survived all the boat breakages and swam through proudly and rebuilt the boat. The poet could not survived 'self' breakage.



Wondering want Ghams physically broke the boat..



silly I know, but i m bored. i may even try to argue with SB*
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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:08 pm

koi original poem likhe to pehle taarif waarif karte hai, you know. poem ke dard ko apne andar mahsoos karte hai. Apne own ghamo ko surface mein laate hai, and then wah wah bolte hai, maybe ek-do aansoon bhi baha lete hai. poet se sawaal jawaab karke poem ki taang nahi todte. srsly....



but on a good note, seems like u led a gham free life.

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Post by artood2 Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:23 pm

Tracy Whitney wrote:koi original poem likhe to pehle taarif waarif karte hai, you know. poem ke dard ko apne andar mahsoos karte hai. Apne own ghamo ko surface mein laate hai, and then wah wah bolte hai, maybe ek-do aansoon bhi baha lete hai. poet se sawaal jawaab karke poem ki taang nahi todte. srsly....



but on a good note, seems like u led a gham free life.



isse pehle ki gham humein dubaye, humne gham bottle mein dooba diya.
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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:26 pm

artood2 wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:koi original poem likhe to pehle taarif waarif karte hai, you know. poem ke dard ko apne andar mahsoos karte hai. Apne own ghamo ko surface mein laate hai, and then wah wah bolte hai, maybe ek-do aansoon bhi baha lete hai. poet se sawaal jawaab karke poem ki taang nahi todte. srsly....



but on a good note, seems like u led a gham free life.



isse pehle ki gham humein dubaye, humne gham bottle mein dooba diya.



wah wah.

wah wah.

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Post by artood2 Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:47 pm

Thank you. Tahnk you. I gave you a green.
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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:25 pm

Tracy Whitney wrote:Saikdo gham dubate rahe is kashti ko

Bas ek tera gham hai jo humko hee le dooba.

Wah waah...

Arz kiya hai...

Pyar ki kashtiya doob jaati hi lehron mein kabhi,
Lehre kya, doobte nahi hai gham toofanon mein kabhi... Sad




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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:28 pm

Richard Hed wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:Saikdo gham dubate rahe is kashti ko

Bas ek tera gham hai jo humko hee le dooba.

Wah waah...

Arz kiya hai...

Pyar ki kashtiya doob jaati hi lehron mein kabhi,
Lehre kya, doobte nahi hai gham toofanon mein kabhi... Sad


wah wah. wah wah.

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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:37 pm

Tracy Whitney wrote:
Richard Hed wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:Saikdo gham dubate rahe is kashti ko

Bas ek tera gham hai jo humko hee le dooba.

Wah waah...

Arz kiya hai...

Pyar ki kashtiya doob jaati hi lehron mein kabhi,
Lehre kya, doobte nahi hai gham toofanon mein kabhi... Sad


wah wah. wah wah.

Thanks...did you notice the Sad I added at the end to enhance the mood...

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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:44 pm

totally saw it.

kahani ne aapki dil ko pighala diya
ab aansoon na bahaiye, jal bhi jayenge.

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Post by Rekz Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:56 pm

I will do a rap..



gham..gham..gham..show off ur gham..

with a chewing gum,hit ur nearest gym..

45min ke baat..spit the gum along with ur gham





wah wah wah...Gham 459784477 kya baat hai! adipoli...
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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:57 pm

Evil or Very Mad

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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:00 pm

Tracy Whitney wrote:totally saw it.

kahani ne aapki dil ko pighala diya
ab aansoon na bahaiye, jal bhi jayenge.


Agar Aansoon se hi haath do ne padenge
Toh Gham ki raftaar ko rokegaa kaun
Agar Aansoon se bhi bichade toh
Toh ho jaaynege sada ke liye moun...Sad

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Post by Miss.Blah Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:02 pm

Rekz wrote:I will do a rap..



gham..gham..gham..show off ur gham..

with a chewing gum,hit ur nearest gym..

45min ke baat..spit the gum along with ur gham





wah wah wah...Gham 459784477 kya baat hai! adipoli...
lol! Gham 3077217049 lol! Gham 3077217049

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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:08 pm

Richard Hed wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:totally saw it.

kahani ne aapki dil ko pighala diya
ab aansoon na bahaiye, jal bhi jayenge.


Agar Aansoon se hi haath do ne padenge
Toh Gham ki raftaar ko rokegaa kaun
Agar Aansoon se bhi bichade toh
Toh ho jaaynege sada ke liye moun...Sad

k the martinis have worn down... will get the inspiration to answer to this the next time. Good ones.

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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:14 pm

Rekz wrote:I will do a rap..


gham..gham..gham..show off ur gham..

with a chewing gum,hit ur nearest gym..

45min ke baat..spit the gum along with ur gham





wah wah wah...Gham 459784477 kya baat hai! adipoli...

Good attempt - so here's one for you:

Maami - have you evah heard real poets rap,
You haven't! And it shows when you spout crap,
45 mins@ the gym ain't cuttin' it so shut yo trap,
MC Rich lays it down like it is and that's a wrap!

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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 4:33 pm

Tracy Whitney wrote:
Richard Hed wrote:
Tracy Whitney wrote:totally saw it.

kahani ne aapki dil ko pighala diya
ab aansoon na bahaiye, jal bhi jayenge.


Agar Aansoon se hi haath done padenge
Toh Gham ki raftaar ko rokegaa kaun
Agar Aansoon se bhi bichade toh
Toh ho jaaynege sada ke liye moun...Sad

k the martinis have worn down... will get the inspiration to answer to this the next time. Good ones.

Thanks - I wrote that while discussing metrics, so take it for what it's worth w/grammar mistakes et al...

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Post by Guest Thu Aug 04, 2011 6:25 pm

Rekz wrote:I will do a rap..



gham..gham..gham..show off ur gham..

with a chewing gum,hit ur nearest gym..

45min ke baat..spit the gum along with ur gham





wah wah wah...Gham 459784477 kya baat hai! adipoli...



good one Smile)

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Post by artood2 Fri Aug 05, 2011 6:19 pm

Rekz wrote:I will do a rap..



gham..gham..gham..show off ur gham..

with a chewing gum,hit ur nearest gym..

45min ke baat..spit the gum along with ur gham





wah wah wah...Gham 459784477 kya baat hai! adipoli...



Wasn't there an ad,



tum itna jo muskura rahe ho, kya gum hai jisko chaba rahe ho.
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