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Post by Petrichor Fri Jun 14, 2013 10:59 am

Vidya - It is friday. I want a short story of 3-4 paragraphs with a life lesson.

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Post by Guest Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:00 am


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Post by goodcitizn Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:12 am

HE                                         SHE
     HE                                    SHE
           HE                                SHE
                       HE                            SHE
                           HE                             SHE
                HE                                 SHE
           HE                              SHE
       HE                              SHE
                HE                     SHE
                      HE             SHE
                             HE   SHE
                               HESHE

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Post by Impedimenta Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:19 am

naane vetti raja, naane vetti mandiri. just saying....

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Post by Guest Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:21 am

goodcitizn wrote:HE                                         SHE
     HE                                    SHE
           HE                                SHE
                       HE                            SHE
                           HE                             SHE
                HE                                 SHE
           HE                              SHE
       HE                              SHE
                HE                     SHE
                      HE             SHE
                             HE   SHE
                               HESHE


GC, there are too many gaps in your story.

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Post by Petrichor Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:23 am

goodcitizn (MODIFIED) wrote:HE                                         SHE
     HE                                    SHE
           HE                                SHE               SHE2
                       HE                            SHE
                           HE                             SHE
     HE2           HE                                 SHE    SHE2 AND SHE3
           HE                              SHE
  HE2     HE                              SHE3 AND IT
                HE                     SHE
                      HE             SHE
                             HE   SHE
                               HESHE3    SHE2IT   HE

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Post by goodcitizn Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:31 am

LOL! What is IT? A dog?

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Post by Hellsangel Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:33 am

GC, what kind a of a pet owner are you? Referring to a dog as 'it'. Bad GC!
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Post by goodcitizn Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:37 am

Bad Hellsbells! Didn't notice IT in M-B's post. tongue

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Post by Hellsangel Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:39 am

goodcitizn wrote:Bad Hellsbells! Didn't notice IT in M-B's post. tongue

I hate this new quoting feature. 
Bad GC! For even thinking of a dog as 'it'! Double Razz!
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Post by Petrichor Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:39 am

SHE is dead; SHE2 and SHE3 after experimenting with nascent latent lesbianism and breaking up over a cute little puppy decide to settle down; the last line should read

HE2SHE3    SHE2IT  HE

where in our hero's wingman HE2 rescues SHE3 from her puppy love for the puppy and SHE2, who is genetically predisposed towards only women and remembering her theory of rebound from college days decides to spend the rest of days with aforementioned abandoned puppy. The protaganist HE left high and dry becomes a hermit, instead of her mitten.

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Post by goodcitizn Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:51 am

Hellsangel wrote:
goodcitizn wrote:Bad Hellsbells! Didn't notice IT in M-B's post. tongue

I hate this new quoting feature. 
Bad GC! For even thinking of a dog as 'it'! Double Razz!


Touche' ... Okay, let IT be an IT guy! Laughing

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Post by goodcitizn Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:56 am

Muezzin-Bar'chu wrote:SHE is dead; SHE2 and SHE3 after experimenting with nascent latent lesbianism and breaking up over a cute little puppy decide to settle down; the last line should read

HE2SHE3    SHE2IT  HE

where in our hero's wingman HE2 rescues SHE3 from her puppy love for the puppy and SHE2, who is genetically predisposed towards only women and remembering her theory of rebound from college days decides to spend the rest of days with aforementioned abandoned puppy. The protaganist HE left high and dry becomes a hermit, instead of her mitten.


I presume that SHE3 is latent and SHE2 is patent. Why did you kill SHE?

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Post by Petrichor Fri Jun 14, 2013 12:03 pm

SHE wore a burkha, carried a BRCA and kept abusing her Brocca's area.

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Post by goodcitizn Fri Jun 14, 2013 12:12 pm

Muezzin-Bar'chu wrote:SHE wore a burkha, carried a BRCA and kept abusing her Brocca's area.

Gosh, sounds like severe damaged goods. The burqa prolly hid mutation and motor dysfunction. Good thing the wicked witch is dead!

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Post by Petrichor Fri Jun 14, 2013 2:56 pm

And sometimes it was Doug Adams,
Madame Bovary or French poetry
They covered it all, Yes our
Rachael and very own David

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Post by Hellsangel Fri Jun 14, 2013 2:58 pm

goodcitizn wrote:
Muezzin-Bar'chu wrote:SHE wore a burkha, carried a BRCA and kept abusing her Brocca's area.

Gosh, sounds like severe damaged goods. The burqa prolly hid mutation and motor dysfunction. Good thing the wicked witch is dead!

Ding dong!
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Post by Guest Fri Jun 14, 2013 3:00 pm

Muezzin-Bar'chu wrote:And sometimes it was Doug Adams,
Madame Bovary or French poetry
They covered it all, Yes our
Rachael and very own David

Aww. I deleted my story. This would have been such a good add-on.

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Post by Petrichor Fri Jun 14, 2013 3:02 pm

Vidya Bagchi wrote:
Muezzin-Bar'chu wrote:And sometimes it was Doug Adams,
Madame Bovary or French poetry
They covered it all, Yes our
Rachael and very own David

Aww. I deleted my story. This would have been such a good add-on.

I just saw it...and posted even though you had deleted, hoping you would reinstate, complete with my add-on.

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