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Post by Guest Wed Aug 31, 2011 7:44 am

pink polo shirt
blue denim jeans
tan shoulder bag
soft curls on the forehead

glenlivet scotch
grey goose martini
wings on the plate
all etched in my memory

my head on your shoulder
hand in your big hand
warm breath on my neck
an evening that could never end

in the crowded side walk
with just you and me
that parting kiss
all etched in my memory

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Post by Merlot Daruwala Wed Aug 31, 2011 7:55 am

Gosh woman..how could you share our most precious intimate moments with the whole world??
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Post by Guest Wed Aug 31, 2011 8:32 am

Merlot Daruwala wrote:Gosh woman..how could you share our most precious intimate moments with the whole world??

he he Wink

chalo this means you approve the choice of alcohol for the night.

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Post by Bittu Wed Aug 31, 2011 8:35 am

weaksauce, tracy. After scotch and martini, where's the ACTION? "head on your shoulder, warm breath on my neck..." isn't cutting it.

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Post by Guest Wed Aug 31, 2011 8:55 am

Ya well. This is to display the strong character :p

besides, damn, I can never write something w/o the need to edit. The last line was suppose to be 'that long parting-kiss'.

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Post by Guest Wed Aug 31, 2011 9:02 am

Bittu wrote:weaksauce, tracy. After scotch and martini, where's the ACTION? "head on your shoulder, warm breath on my neck..." isn't cutting it.

waise hmm. Curious. What else could it be in a bar/restaurant setting?

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Post by Bittu Wed Aug 31, 2011 9:31 am

Tracy Whitney wrote:
waise hmm. Curious. What else could it be in a bar/restaurant setting?

1. plenty of under-the-table play
2. move out of the restaurant, find dark alley and quickie behind a dumpster. were you wearing a skirt?
3. dive into a dark lounge, start heavy groping session.

This got me thinking about my wild past. Now I have a wild boner...

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Post by Guest Wed Aug 31, 2011 9:54 am

glad u didn't write that piece.. lol...

I saw this couple kissing on the sidewalk on my way home y'day. He was wearing all that. I usually drink that martini. The rest of it, I made up.

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Post by Rekz Wed Aug 31, 2011 10:09 am

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