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Post by Guest Sun Sep 23, 2012 1:30 pm

did you delete a poem about a girl you posted yesterday -- a girl walking and bewitching in gay abandon? i tried searching for it today but ultimately decided that either my mind was playing tricks with me or the "delete" feature in charvaka.forumotion.com was being used recklessly.

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Post by Marathadi-Saamiyaar Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:03 pm

Huzefa Kapasi wrote:did you delete a poem about a girl you posted yesterday -- a girl walking and bewitching in gay abandon? i tried searching for it today but ultimately decided that either my mind was playing tricks with me or the "delete" feature in charvaka.forumotion.com was being used recklessly.

To Nats:

I think you are violating copyright laws by using the "Nats" handle. This is a handle used by someone I have known for more than 10 years. Everytime I come across "nats", only her image comes to my mind.

Please cease and desist from using this handle within 48 hours.

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Post by Guest Sun Sep 23, 2012 2:20 pm

hi hoojie i deleted it. didn't like the way i used the main word, 'unknowingly'. thot would modify it and repost... was it good/bad/meah?

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Post by Guest Sun Sep 23, 2012 10:02 pm

basically if i can't share something with someone right away, it starts building up and i type something down like this. later i hate it...had not saved a copy, but i think this is how it went...

she goes walking
breezing through the street
sunshine in her curls
mischief in her eyes
bag thrown over the shoulder
with the same careless abandon
breaking oh so many hearts
along the way, she goes walking so...
so unknowingly

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Post by Guest Mon Sep 24, 2012 12:47 am

its good nats. you should try building it up even more. (i had wanted to comment accordingly when i tried searching for it the next day.)

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Post by Guest Mon Sep 24, 2012 7:35 am

Huzefa Kapasi wrote:its good nats. you should try building it up even more. (i had wanted to comment accordingly when i tried searching for it the next day.)

texas! The poem was inspired after reading someone's description of how he remembered a girl from his college. Had he written more, the poem would have been longer too, heh.

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Post by Merlot Daruwala Mon Sep 24, 2012 7:50 am

C'mon the girl IS you. Surely you don't have to depend on Mr Halwai's descriptions to elaborate...
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Post by Guest Mon Sep 24, 2012 8:00 am

Merlot Daruwala wrote:C'mon the girl IS you. Surely you don't have to depend on Mr Halwai's descriptions to elaborate...

LOL Very Happy

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Post by Guest Mon Sep 24, 2012 8:20 am


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Post by Guest Mon Sep 24, 2012 8:28 am

this song has so many frikking versions and artists... took me back to a nightmarish day at work.

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Post by Hellsangel Mon Sep 24, 2012 8:43 am

Natalia Romanova wrote:this song has so many frikking versions and artists... took me back to a nightmarish day at work.

You want the original in Portuguese?

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