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Post by Guest Thu Nov 19, 2015 10:22 am

why do you make a mother so desperate
why do you make her doubt herself
i have one or two bones to pick with you
but can you please please set things straight

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Post by Guest Thu Nov 19, 2015 10:54 am

incomplete. please re-submit in triplicate with a photocopy of your aadhar card duly signed by you.

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Post by Guest Thu Nov 19, 2015 10:55 am

try once more. writing is nothing but RE-WRITING.

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Post by Guest Thu Nov 19, 2015 10:56 am

read it again. it's complete, lol. sometimes the fault lies with the reader.

but this is a damn good poem. chisel it a bit more if you are inclined?

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Post by Guest Thu Nov 19, 2015 11:49 am

lol just jotted down something quick to relieve stress... your first answer made me laugh, so i guess the prayer worked, it's still unanswered, but i guess as long as one can laugh...

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Post by Guest Thu Nov 19, 2015 12:25 pm

kya yaaar? give it another try. take a month. i like this poem. i have copied it to my diary.

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