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Post by Guest Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:03 pm

it hurt to tell him to leave me
but not as much as it did
when he agreed.

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 26, 2013 4:59 am

sweet and short yet full of meaning. my kind of verse. 10/10.

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 26, 2013 11:00 am

Huzefa Kapasi wrote:sweet and short yet full of meaning. my kind of verse. 10/10.

kewl. thanks!

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 26, 2013 3:03 pm

is this what they call haiku?

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 26, 2013 3:55 pm

seven wrote:is this what they call haiku?

me no know haiku. me just splitting a sentence in three lines.

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 26, 2013 6:58 pm

It's easy to tell others
but hard to follow it yourself
and that is to....move on!

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Post by Guest Sun Jan 27, 2013 11:09 am

the hurt that even the other party was thinking of leaving.

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Post by Guest Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:08 pm

kinnera wrote:It's easy to tell others
but hard to follow it yourself
and that is to....move on!

This is abt my itching to advise you to move on. But if i were in your position, i'd have been a wreck. It's easy to advise others, hard to follow it oneself.

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Post by Guest Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:08 pm

Vidya Bagchi wrote:the hurt that even the other party was thinking of leaving.

I got it, Viddu

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