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Post by Guest Fri Sep 12, 2014 1:36 pm

he said pity me i said pity you!
he said i'll turn your world upside down
i said be my guest
he went ahead and did just that
upside down downside up
one more time
downside up and upside down
as I ate my icecream
he said see! I flipped you over!
i looked around to see, surprisingly
it was him standing on his head instead!
but some things you gotta keep to yourself
so I said oh baby
pity me pity me pity me!

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Post by swapna Fri Sep 12, 2014 1:45 pm

I enjoyed that. Was that your own?

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Post by Guest Fri Sep 12, 2014 1:45 pm

swapna wrote:I enjoyed that. Was that your own?


hey yeah. TGIF mode.

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Post by smArtha Fri Sep 12, 2014 1:58 pm

Beatrix Kiddo wrote:
swapna wrote:I enjoyed that. Was that your own?


hey yeah. TGIF mode.

It is not 'poetic' enough. But I liked the simple irony highlighted there :-)

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